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Knight of Secrecy
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since 2001-10-12
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San Juan, Puerto Rico

0 posted 2001-12-05 03:42 PM


Restless Bullet

{ This poem has been edited due to its suicidal content. Passions in Poetry does not condone suicide and therefore posts found glorifying harm to ones self or suicide will be closed (cherish/Moderator }


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rolly_polly
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since 2001-10-10
Posts 41
puerto rico
1 posted 2001-12-05 03:48 PM


Well Humi what can i say  ....this was a nice poem but i'm sorry u have to be going thru all this stuff, Hope it gets better for you man, hang in there.
Laterz


~parallel universe~

Honey
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since 2001-10-09
Posts 92
Hot girl From Canada
2 posted 2001-12-05 04:25 PM


Very interesting write. Well I thought maybe I would give you some advice.  Love will come and love will go they can leave you cold and bare.  But always know that we're all here and that we truly still care  
Feel better soon and go out and find someone who will treat you as you deserve to be treated.

It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In.

He Who Laughs Last Thinks Slowest!!

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