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Poet Unknown
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 140
Missouri

0 posted 2001-12-03 08:28 PM

Where would I be without you?
What would I do?
Got my mind all hazy,
And I dont wanna go crazy.
Thinking constantly of you,
Always to you I stay true.
You know I'd die if you weren't with me,
How much love wish you could see.
So far apart yet close in heart,
Somehow I knew it from the very start.
Make my mind all lazy,
And I don't wanna go crazy.
Tear for a tear eye for an eye,
Why do we have to be so far away why?
I see a ship in the bay,
Walk to you all that way.
And I don't wanna go crazy.
Keep you warm on those cold dark nights,
Hold you close and turn off the lights.
I don't wanna go crazy,
So give me all yours baby.
And together we can make it safely,
And I won't have to go crazy.

Do as you please....strike forth down upon your knees...Darkness Falls on Those Without Souls

Alyssa

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since 2001-05-30

Posts 385
IM ENGAGED!!!!!

1 posted 2001-12-03 08:33 PM

Hey!! i really really liked this
first poem i read tonight...good way to start out LOL
love it!

If at first you don't succeed, destroy all evidence that you tried.
You never really learn to swear until you learn to drive.

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

2 posted 2001-12-03 09:02 PM

Very sweet... sentiment is always a good thing (: Enjoyed, as always!

--Marie

If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway.

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

3 posted 2001-12-04 01:36 AM

Very sweet poem I liked it keep up the great work.
Lauren

Lisa_bebe15
Member

since 2001-11-15

Posts 151
Florida

4 posted 2001-12-04 09:42 AM

Very nice..I enjoyed reading that. Keep up the good work :P

"Water Over Matter"

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2001-12-09 12:12 PM

really sweet poem, vey much enjoyed
thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

6 posted 2001-12-09 06:02 PM

Very nice! I have to say I liked it!

Titus

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

7 posted 2001-12-10 09:10 AM

I like the way this read, Kyle. You always did write well.

The repetition worked well. I hope you don't go crazy with this girl.

Thanks for sharing. It's good to see you again.

~AF~

"When I eat I feel. It is better if I don't feel, I am too afraid." - Ellen West

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

8 posted 2001-12-10 10:06 AM

This kinda reminds me of a song lol i dunno so dont ask me why!! I liked it though..very cute

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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