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Hallucination
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since 2001-03-18
Posts 419


0 posted 2001-12-03 06:55 PM


" Without You "
© 2001 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved
V1:
Saw your face in my tear drops,
broke down, cried, 'Cause that were just to much.
Memories is killing me,
all this pain, is in the way can't breathe...

Built:
How could I let you slip away
let you out between these two hands of mine,
if only I could turn back the hands of time...

C:
'Cause every time you breathe it hurts inside,
and I can't figure my wrong from right.
no, I don't wanna say goodnight,
'Cause I can't last another lifetime...Without you.
( 2x )

V2:
Held your hand in a lost dream,
heart broken, thinking this can't be real.
Remember the time we shared,
the nights when, you whispered in my ear...

Built:
How could I let you slip away,
let you out between these two hands of mine,
if only I could turn back the hands of time.

C:
'Cause every time you breathe it hurts inside,
and I can't figure my wrong from right.
no, I don't wanna say goodnight,
'Cause I can't last another lifetime...Without you.
( 4x )

© Copyright 2001 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved
Jezziekaka
Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 58
where the trees touch the sky
1 posted 2001-12-03 07:42 PM


So sad! I loved this!   I liked the ending the best!   How do you write so well!? I can't!!   LOL

Jezzika

be dangerous, unpredictable, and make a lot of noise!

lone_poet707
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since 2001-11-17
Posts 70
black hole named Aylmer
2 posted 2001-12-03 10:03 PM


that was incredible! Hope to read more from u :]
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