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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
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Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2001-12-02 09:09 AM



So much pain,
I’m slowly sinking under.
I sit here in silence,
Excepting everything that’s wrong.
Without you, my life is incomplete,
Without you my sun will never rise again.
My own mind is now mocking me,
Me and my own self-pity.
How could I let this happen?
Everything that went wrong,
It was all my fault.
I never wanted this to happen,
But it did…..

~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX

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EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
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Here, Now, Forever
1 posted 2001-12-02 09:30 PM


yea.. dont you hate it when your own mind mocks you? i get that alot from my jerkoff mind.
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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
2 posted 2001-12-03 01:33 PM


I know its hard not to think this way...i understand how your feeling..its a very difficult thing to handle when you loose someone..nicely done

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

peachesNcream
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since 2001-08-21
Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears
3 posted 2001-12-03 09:07 PM


this was a good poem...i'm not sure who this one was about though..salguod lol..keep on writing cuz it helps get ur feelings and emotions out! lylas ~Jess

~*~How can we be friends if everytime I think of you I know that's all we'll ever be~*~

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

4 posted 2001-12-05 10:39 PM


just remember this sweetie......it will get ya through life.
1.  It takes two to tango.
2.  Your beautiful, and he wasn't good
enough to start with if he broke your heart.
3.  LUV YA

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 718
California
5 posted 2001-12-05 10:41 PM


It really does hepl getting your emotions and feeling up but anyway I loved this poem keep up the great work.
  Lauren

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