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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
You want me to change but I wont, So your just going to have to deal with it. I'm sorry I'm not perfect, And even if I could be I wouldn't want to. You say you want me out so you don't have to look at me, Soon I will be gone and never come back. It's you who causes me to drink and smoke, Because that's the only way to escape the pain. By telling me you want to hurt me physically, You make me never want to be at home. You always make fun of me and put me down, So I know how you truely feel. Nothing I ever do is good enough, Plus you say you'll never be able to trust me. SO tell me one thing mom, Why did you even have me! Lauren |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
my thoughts exactly, good write. Liefhe alle ten spijte van duivel... A tes souhaits... A tes amours... Qu ils restent. J'ai t'adore. Je t'aime. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
hey! nobody makes you drink and smoke 'cept yourself!! I should know.. I'm a drinker and smoker.. and another thing.. believe it or not, your mother loves you and is most likely only doing and saying the things she says and does because she is worried.. thats all.. you know.. you probably give your mom more stress than she gives you. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
I don't know you and you obviously don't know me but you have no right to tell me why I do something.The reason I drink and smoke is because I'm stressed out and depressed because of the way my mom treats me and she doesn't know I do so you can't blame this on me.So next time you think you should analize someone elses situation you shouldn't because you don't know the whole situaion. Lauren |
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Lisa_bebe15 Member
since 2001-11-15
Posts 151Florida |
calm down here guys..I liked that..its not worth getting into a fight about. "Water Over Matter" |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
i lovd the emotion in this and i think you did a good job expressing yourself. i don't think there's any reason to yell about anything. i think that eagle scorpion brings up a valid point about people controlling there own actions but that's just his opinion and you can take it or leave it. keep posting your work. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was so sad lauren...who is treating you like this! thats horrible to have to put up with...as a matter of fact i dunno what im saying..YOU SHOULDNT PUT UP WITH IT!!! ::hugs::....you'll always have us tho  ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i liked the emotions and way you expressed them, but to me i ask that "exact" question at the end to, fate. Hey...#25437 |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
awwwwwww LUAREN!!  ...this really hit home hard..parents suck!  ...i just hope things really do get better for you at home...geeze!...hang in there girl!thanks for sharing this, i know i can identify with it.  |
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lone_poet707 Member
since 2001-11-17
Posts 70black hole named Aylmer |
the emotion is soooo strong in this piece- i love it! on a more serious note, i know what ur goin thru. I have an abusive father, so I'm here 4 ya if ya need advice or just to talk... -Joe |
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