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gymnast
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0 posted 2001-12-01 04:39 PM


From the moment we met
I always trusted you
Into my heart I let,
Because I trust in you.

I can tell you everything
My secrets, hopes and dreams
You also share your everything
You're a friend on which I can lean.

You're there when I'm feeling down
And help to stop me frown
You listen to what's wrong
You've been there for so long.

On you I have come to depend
You help me,like a true friend
In times of crisis and in need
You are a true friend indeed

We have fun together
Laughing, talking sharing
We do it all together
You're always so loving and caring

We're honest with each other
Caring, thoughtful, honest with me
In you a place my heart and soul
My every hope, dream and goal

I want to thank you for everything
You've did everything for me
I Thank You more than words can sy
You help light up my day.

You truly are the one for me,
The best friend there ever could be.

© Copyright 2001 Amanda - All Rights Reserved
TopGunLauren
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1 posted 2001-12-01 10:58 PM


Very sweet poem I liked it and your lucky to have a friend like you do.
  Lauren

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2 posted 2001-12-02 09:41 PM


..people like that are really something, aren't they?
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3 posted 2001-12-03 01:32 PM


Those of us who have such amazing people in our life such as the one you described here in the poem are very lucky. Those people should get the recognition they deserve as well..if you truely feel this way about this person than i think that you should share this poem with them because im shur that they'd love to read it..but thats just a thought...i thought this poem was very sweet  

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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4 posted 2001-12-07 11:25 PM


beautiful tribute.  this person must really be special  

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?


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5 posted 2001-12-09 08:50 PM


Aww... best friends are the best, aren't they?     Well done.

--Marie

If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway.

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6 posted 2001-12-10 09:27 AM


Wonderful!  
It's always a nice thing to see people finding friends that mean so much to them. You're a very lucky person.  

Thanks for sharing.

~AF~

"When I eat I feel. It is better if I don't feel, I am too afraid." - Ellen West

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