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Baby_Angel123
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0 posted 2001-12-01 08:48 AM


               Only You

Every time I see your face,
Every time I hear your voice,
All my worries go away.

When you hold me in your arms,
And kiss me on the lips,
I feel as though my life is so complete.

When I'm feeling rather low,
And feel as though I cant go on,
You always seem to find a way,
To bring a smile upon my face.

No one else in this world,
Has ever made me feel this way,
No one but you,
And only you.

© Copyright 2001 Heather - All Rights Reserved
Streen
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1 posted 2001-12-01 10:07 AM


This is a great poem. I often feel this way about my girlfriend, and I'm glad you have somebody that makes you feel that way, too. ^_^

-Derek

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2 posted 2001-12-01 03:54 PM


I'm happy for you that you have someone in your life that makes you feel this way.  Wonderful thing, huh?     Thanks for sharing this.  I look forward to reading more  

--Marie

If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway.

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3 posted 2001-12-01 06:03 PM


Nice write! =)

Sincerely,
Titus

TopGunLauren
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4 posted 2001-12-01 08:55 PM


Nice poem I liked it.
  Lauren

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5 posted 2001-12-21 03:27 PM


such a sweet dedicated poem
hope you show this person this
thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


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