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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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Anger seeps from every word- Where did we go wrong? Friends forever, Sisterhood. We used to be so close... Now we just scowl and frown, Depressing thoughts, Unending frustration. You just question me, as I scold you. What is this? What have we come to? All I know- something has to change. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
This is just out of crazy emotion right now...straight from my anger. I know I haven't replied too much today... but I promise I will come in and do a mass replying later.  Thanks for reading."I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." |
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Jezziekaka Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 58where the trees touch the sky |
Great poem!! My sister and I sometimes argue, but we always work it out I sure hope you do!!! Jezzika be dangerous, unpredictable, and make a lot of noise! [This message has been edited by Jezziekaka (edited 11-30-2001).] |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
Hey this is sad. What is going on? If you wanna talk about it, you know my sn! *hugs*  ~*Nikki*~ *~Fighting for your love~* |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Then change it This is another well written piece *hugs* Well done.--Marie [This message has been edited by Fading Away (edited 12-01-2001).] |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Unfortunately some things change....friendships among many different things are one of them...im sorry that this happened to you and your friend...nicely written though ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Very sad piece the wierd part is I just wrote and e-mail to My former best friend about how we are growing apart.But anyway I can relate to this piece and I know how it feels.Keep up the awsome work I love this one. Lauren |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
the tone of this piece really gives the reader an intimate sense of the anger and frustation that you have. i hope things get better for the two of you, keep posting your work. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
at least you know that there IS something wrong. losing friends is hard...mending ties is somewhat harder. i hope things work out for you jenn... |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
Jenn, i liked this one. A message to truly be heard, you said it VERY well. and definitly need some changes...definitly. Hey...#25437 |
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Honey Member
since 2001-10-09
Posts 92Hot girl From Canada |
Very well wrote. Sometimes our best peice come out of fits of rage. I hope things work out for the best It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In. |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Hey Jen! Good write. The emotions and feelings were wonderfully painted for us to see, and for some of us, to relate to. I have a few deep friendships, that with the move and all, are growing apart, it's hard. Anyways, I had a thought: maybe chance "All I know" to "All I Know Is." Without another word there, I feel myself falling of an edge, expecting the line to continue. Just a thought. Good write! =) Sincerely, Titus |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Very nice poem Jenn. I know a few people in my life that should read this. Hope the situation gets better. Gotta go. Jon "Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Nice one Jenn. You come straight from the heart most of the time but this is a real scorcher. I like these sort from you. They say so much about you as a person. Thanks for the read. ~AF~ Why does Sea World have a seafood restaurant? I'm halfway through my fish burger and I realize, Oh my gosh....I could be eating a slow learner. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
At least now you know there is a problem And now are willing to do something about it That a start, keep staying on the same track thanks for sharing là où est mon amour? |
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