The Love I Will Never Have

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Teen Poetry #5

The Love I Will Never Have

krystlebabe19
Junior Member

since 2001-11-09

Posts 27

0 posted 2001-11-28 09:56 PM

      The Love I will Never Have

Im in love with your smile,
and the way you always make me laugh

I have these  feelings for you,
that I can't hind now or put in the past

I pray and beg to god some day you will feel the same way too

If you only knew how sronge this love is,
that I have for you

I tired to  forget you,
pretend what I feel really isn't their

But all I can picture is you  running
your fingers threw my hair, telling me you love me and holding me tight

To me this would be my dream

   "The perfect night"

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

1 posted 2001-11-28 10:03 PM

Very sweet poem I hope some day your dream comes true.Keep up the awsome work I loved this poem.
Lauren

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-11-29 09:41 AM

yes, this is something I remember wishing for

sometimes later though, you are very thankful that those wishes don't come true...

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2001-11-29 10:16 AM

This was a beautiful poem...i too hope that this comes true one day

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2001-12-01 01:15 AM

This is a sweet and well-written poem. Nice work! I really enjoyed it, and look forward to reading more

--Marie

If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway.

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