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Zukene_Chic
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since 2001-09-26
Posts 152
Cali

0 posted 2001-11-27 10:43 PM


-Cristmas-

I used to always
Look forward
To Christmas
And spending tons
Of time with my
Dearest friends
But now, all is lost
And no one will
Be there to
Smile, and sing
With

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Chel
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
1 posted 2001-11-28 12:17 PM


Interesting piece.  I didn't understand it, but im sure there is a silver lining that I just didn't get.  But keep up the good work.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front."
"You are special and unique in your own way." "Your FAITH is all you need"

Yoda
Junior Member
since 2001-11-28
Posts 19

2 posted 2001-11-28 05:30 PM


I understood it having been there before... well at least I felt that way. I'm sorry. I hope you find someone to smile with. A friend, a family member, a lover... whatever. Just make yourself happy. *hugs*



You know its been a good day when you come home, realize you forgot your key again, and decide to climb through the doggie door instead of complaining

[This message has been edited by Yoda (edited 11-28-2001).]

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