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Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2001-11-27 06:45 PM

There’s something I must admit . . .
When you hold me, I wanna shout,
You give me a feeling, deep within,
That makes me smile uncontrollably,
I’m not sure what it is . . .
But I think its that word . . . Love
Everytyme you hold me,
I wanna shout it out to the word,
I think I’m falling in love with you
I don’t want to jinx it,
So I’m going to bite my tongue,
And not let the words escape my lips
But the truth of the matter is: . . .
I’m falling in love with you!

If I held a star everytyme
he made me smile,I'd have the
evening sky in my palm, if
one was removed for every tear
he caused, I'd be emptyhanded.

vixengrl04
Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

1 posted 2001-11-27 09:24 PM

Awww this was sooo sweet and happy!!! I know what you mean about sometimes having such wonderful strong feelings that you just wanna announce them to the world!! LOL, go ahead and shout if it makes u happier!

~*Nikki*~

     *~Fighting for your love~*
    *~Is something I cannot do~*
   *~I'm not good enough to win~*
*~And I'm not strong enough to lose~*

Yoda
Junior Member

since 2001-11-28

Posts 19

2 posted 2001-11-28 05:43 PM

Love is so beautiful. *sigh* You wrote about it in a way that was simple yet meaningful. Describing the stages of excited questioning... very good.

You know its been a good day when you come home, realize you forgot your key again, and decide to climb through the doggie door instead of complaining

Acies

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2001-12-21 04:53 PM

Tamma --- just wanna know his name now

Is this a new guy?
you have so much "lovelife" in you
good luck in this relationship
thanks for sharing again
nice to see you around

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

Shygirl82
Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 245
Ilinois

4 posted 2001-12-22 03:35 AM

I like this one..its pure and simple and very sweet. Good luck to you on this new "love" of yours!!
~Nikki~

Smile!! You never know who may be falling in love with it...

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

5 posted 2001-12-23 08:46 AM

Ooooo Tamma.

Nah good for you, hun. If a guy is making you this happy, it's all good.

Remember to reply as well to others work.

~AF~

If this is all the world has to offer, I want a refund on my life.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

6 posted 2001-12-25 12:46 PM

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

7 posted 2001-12-25 01:45 AM

hehe awwwww tamma you go girl! this was so cute!
robin

repeat after me: punk is the best music ever created!

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

8 posted 2001-12-26 11:59 AM

TELL HIM, THEN! Hehe.. very nice poem.
Well-written, and enjoyed, as always. (:

--Marie

If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway.

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