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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
You thought you owned a silver curl Cut right from an average girl Living in a tiny house that always managed to get very loud On the other side of the rickety fence broken beer bottles and faded prom gowns sleep in the mud Did you really think it was so much better on the other side? Did you? But I don't have to sit here waiting Living in my hell because it looks so good on a fresh set of breasts I'll always be dark, but I don't have to be the broken mule Supposedly strange little self-rejected toys Would you sleep with the devil just to prove that you're gone? Children playing out at night because we think it's cool That's all we are Fearlessness isn't living without fear, fearlessness is being afraid and still living. jaimespoetry.blogspot.com [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 11-27-2001).] |
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Yoda Junior Member
since 2001-11-28
Posts 19 |
"I'll always be dark, but I don't have to be the broken mule" You're right!!! You can be in touch with your dark side without LIVING in it. Glad you realized that.  Good poem. Into metaphors huh? That's cool. They're fun to play with. Thanks for sharing. You know its been a good day when you come home, realize you forgot your key again, and decide to climb through the doggie door instead of complaining [This message has been edited by Yoda (edited 11-28-2001).] |
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Poet Unknown Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 140Missouri |
that was interesting, liked it Do as you please....strike forth down upon your knees...Darkness Falls on Those Without Souls |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
youre poems always make me pause to read them more carefully, and you put a lot into this piece. i enjoyed it a lot, keep posting your work. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
oh man jaime i wouldnt know what this is about even if i tried my hardest to provide an explaination. like barn though, it made me think a lot about what you were trying to say. the images and the title and then ending- it was all quite perplexing. i liked reading it lots. very reflective and craftly written. thanks for sharing  i luve mi con-tray! lyke a big an brown stetch olan wiv losa sun! [This message has been edited by cherish (edited 11-29-2001).] |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
Jamie...wow. i found the poem, awesome...left my mind provoked, but think your poems are deep...quite the piece i like reading...and expression wise-dark. well written. Hey...#25437 |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
OOOoooo A poem with hidden messages..LOL Gott alove those "analyze the lines" poems... Incredibly write here...Loved it bunches. *Goes back to reading it over and over again to get a better understanding.* "I'd rather die purposely alone than to have lived an accidental life of solitude."- Jesa "§ùgã®" Thompson |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This is probably one of my favorite poems of all time....i just cant tell you how much i liked this!! ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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