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ill be there.. |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
when you need me, Ill be there So you can cry, or just steal my chair when you need me, Ill be there For better, for worst, for fun When you need me Ill be there no matter how far i gotta travel Ill make it i promise When you need me Ill be there Always in your heart your breath your soul... Forever If at first you don't succeed, destroy all evidence that you tried. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Oooh... very pretty. Sentimental, but still kind of fun and quirky. I like it.  Fearlessness isn't living without fear, fearlessness is being afraid and still living. |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
How sweet!! You sound very devoted to this person, and that is such a special thing!!  ~*Nikki*~ *~Fighting for your love~* |
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Yoda Junior Member
since 2001-11-28
Posts 19 |
I agree with the two above me. Very sentimental and sweet, but not all stiff like some sweet poetry can be. Thanks for sharing this.  You know its been a good day when you come home, realize you forgot your key again, and decide to climb through the doggie door instead of complaining |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Very sweet poem I love it keep up the great work. Lauren |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
Hey thanks guys! If at first you don't succeed, destroy all evidence that you tried. |
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~gretchenp34~ Junior Member
since 2001-10-08
Posts 46Ohio, USA |
thats a good poem but i didnt exactly understand what the chair meant in the first stanze. like what does that mean? im just a lil confused thats all, but the poem is sweet "I cant sleep because i cant lay on my back cause there's a knife for everyday that i have known u." -Marilyn Manson |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Nice work Aly. =) Keep it up. Sincerely, Titus |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
well..a chair is a place to sit..lol...but in this case its kinda like..well kinda like when someone needs a shoulder to cry on...my friend whom i wrote this for likes to sit and talk to me, so i always let him steal my chair, and pour his heart out and i listen..i guess i kinda play a therapist..i dunno its weird If at first you don't succeed, destroy all evidence that you tried. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
very very sweet amee. i liked the read muchos! |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is really inspiring hope someone writes something like this for me  oh well, anywho.......beautifully done keep it up là où est mon amour? |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
very sweet post, we should all be so lucky. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This is so sweet and a wonderful reassurance i am shur for the person whom you wrote it for ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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