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Chel
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since 2000-07-01
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Baltimore, MD, USA

0 posted 2001-11-27 03:13 PM



You told me you'd always be here
Friends forever is what you said
We were supposed to be together forever
You got a bad disease
You were to be here always

Friends forever you'd say
Together forever
You got really sick
Stayed in the hospital for a while
You were to be here always

We promised to always be together
You broke that promise when you left to be with the Heavenly father
I couldn't believe you left
Friends forever you'd say
Supposed to be together forever

How could you leave me here alone
I can't believe you're gone
Friends forever you promised
You weren't to be the first to go
Lying on your death bed
Singing church songs
We were supposed to go together
To be in a good place

Friends forever
You promised
Together forever

"True friends stab you in the front."
"You are special and unique in your own way." "Your FAITH is all you need"

© Copyright 2001 Michelle Y. Plocinik - All Rights Reserved
Dark Enchantress
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1 posted 2001-11-27 06:55 PM


Hey... you're still together. Not physically, but she's with you and you're with her. Good poem. Shows a side of loss that is difficult to put into words. You did it well. Thanks for sharing.

Fearlessness isn't living without fear, fearlessness is being afraid and still living.

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vixengrl04
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since 2001-04-26
Posts 495
East Haddam, CT
2 posted 2001-11-27 09:12 PM


It sounds like you're going through a very tough situation, one of the few that I can't really say I can relate to.  But I do know that all losses are open wounds that will only heal with time.  Remember that loved ones may leave in spirit, but a part of them will always remain within you.  Hope things look brighter!  

~*Nikki*~

     *~Fighting for your love~*
    *~Is something I cannot do~*
   *~I'm not good enough to win~*
*~And I'm not strong enough to lose~*

Yoda
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since 2001-11-28
Posts 19

3 posted 2001-11-28 05:53 PM


I'm not going to lie... I don't relate to this at all. I've never lost anyone to death. However, I have lost people very close to me before so I do know, as you know, that it is one of the most painful things you can go through. I just hope that you, her friends, her family, and anyone that was lucky enough to meet what seems to be a wonderful person will find happiness and peace. Remember her for all the good times... for the beauty.. for the smiles... Remember love. I'm sure she'd want that.



You know its been a good day when you come home, realize you forgot your key again, and decide to climb through the doggie door instead of complaining

TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02
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4 posted 2001-11-28 09:38 PM


Very sad but touching poem it had a really deep message which is also very sda.I hope and pray that somehow one day soon you will being to heal but it won't be easy because I'm going through it.If you ever need to talk I'll always be here and it's a very lovely poem.
  Lauren

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5 posted 2001-12-01 12:57 PM


This is very sad... I'm sorry you had to experience this loss.  But if you were meant to be together to the end, then you'll be together again one day  

*hugs*  Keep writing about it.  It's the best remedy...

--Marie

If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway.

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