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gymnast
Member

since 2001-11-18

Posts 80
Scotland.

0 posted 2001-11-26 06:30 AM

Why can't I seem to say
Those simple little words
In just the right way
So you know that I...

I reherse it in my mind
Those words I want to say
But time can never find
A moment to say I...

My palms are in a sweat
I know what I have to do
If my tongue would only let
Me say I...

I've wrote this poem down
So I can show you
How much I've frowned
When I try to say I...

I'm scared because it's true
I've tried to give you clues
That I've always really knew
How much I Love You.

Lisa_bebe15
Member

since 2001-11-15

Posts 151
Florida

1 posted 2001-11-26 09:36 AM

I loved that poem..I can relate to that poem..Keep up the good work!

"Water Over Matter"

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

2 posted 2001-11-26 12:59 PM

This poem is something everyone can relate to at least sometime in their life. Thanks for sharing.

Dawn

Acies

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2001-11-30 07:05 PM

I hope you do get the courage to say it
don't let time pass you by
thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?

Knight of Secrecy
Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 113
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-11-30 07:33 PM

I like this poem a lot. I can relate, it is always a difficult thing with the person you know that is special. I guess that's what they call love, or maybe fear, it actually has been a torment of mine with the relationship I am now. Good poem here.

-C.M.

vixengrl04
Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

5 posted 2001-11-30 08:47 PM

OMG this was sooo sweet!!! Not only was the whole theme of the poem one that *everyone* can relate to, but the way you wrote it was awesome 2!! I loved how you ended each line with I.... as if you were actually starting to say it but paused. Great use of repetition. This is awesome work, I'm adding it 2 my library!! Hope 2 see more from you soon!!

~*Nikki*~

     *~Fighting for your love~*
    *~Is something I cannot do~*
   *~I'm not good enough to win~*
*~And I'm not strong enough to lose~*

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

6 posted 2001-12-01 02:04 PM

I think this was a creative way to write it... the way you trailed off with I... at each stanza was creative. Nicely done! I enjoyed it, and can't wait to read more

--Marie

If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway.

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

7 posted 2001-12-01 04:25 PM

o wow, i really liked this one, it wuz kewl......lots of emotion in it.....great display of them 2.....thanks 4 the read! bye

~i, i feel so alive, 4 the very 1st time, i cant deny u, and i think i could fly!~P.O.D.

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