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sean mani
Junior Member

since 2001-08-06

Posts 27

0 posted 2001-11-26 04:55 AM

Dangerous Cars

90 on the highway,
95, 100, 125
The seat belt didn't click
The tank blinks yellow-red
The rain-drops rage with Danger.
Bright lights in the dim tunnel
Horns bellow in my ear
My car careens
and she breaks up.

It was the first night
And she was standing there;
Porsche 2001 911 GT2.
Her beauty attracted many a comer,
However, not mine.
I have cast away love as it is.
Its an engine that putters
And leaves you stranded in a highway
And even kills you.

It was the 2nd night
And she was still there,
Beckoning me to take her with me.
I was losing my restraints.
I had shut the doors to love,
But her presence slowly changed my mind.
I ran and sat in the seat and took her.

The nightly winds blew gently upon my face
The nightly stars sparkled against my eyes
My smile lightened as I shut my eyes
And let go the wheel.
Love is a fuel that empowers the engine
In order to ride the car.
Wont you let me take you for a ride?
You can stop the world,
try to change
My mind.
You can stop the world.
But you wont change me.

Horns bellow in my ear,
I open my eyes
She careens and crashes.

By
Sean Mani

(Hey guys, i dont know if yall remember me but i am the guy that published september 29 and revelation to december.  The thing is I am in college now and i know that i promised to have part 2 to revelation to december but i haven't had time to write it...but in the mean while i wrote another poem on cars...my love to cars and my life...hope u guys have fun reading it.  )

Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

1 posted 2001-11-26 11:45 AM

Ah! I think it's safe to say...you like cars?

"Fighting was the only thing I was good at...but I at least I always fought for what I beleived in..."

Alyssa

Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 385
IM ENGAGED!!!!!

2 posted 2001-11-26 05:37 PM

ok i like this its kinda neat...i never thought about writin a poem about cars though..nifty!

If at first you don't succeed, destroy all evidence that you tried.
You never really learn to swear until you learn to drive.

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