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punkrockerrobin
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0 posted 2001-11-26 03:01 AM


love me for i am punk.
don't judge me because i am punk.
judge me for who i am.

i wear collars and studded bracelets.
does any of that matter to you?
i wear torn shorts and band shirts.
does any of that matter to you?

love me for i am robin.
i am loud and gutsy!
i am bold and darin.
does any of this matter to you?

love me for who i am.
i am kind.
i am loveable.
i am caring.
i am me!

love me for i am....
a punk.
i am robin.
love me for me.
and nothing else!

when the day comes that you love me.i hope it will be just because you love me.
nothing more.

titus is mine and mine only!!! *glares at rhonda*
I CAN DO ALL THINGS THROUGH CHRIST WHO STREGTHENS ME! PHILIPPIANS 4:13
love me for i am PUNK!

© Copyright 2001 Robin Hill - All Rights Reserved
Chel
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1 posted 2001-11-26 10:28 AM


Very interesting piece, but I liked it.  You tell it like it is, and if they don't like it then whatever.  Keep up the great work.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front."
"You are special and unique in your own way." "Your FAITH is all you need"

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2 posted 2001-11-26 01:04 PM


Robin,

I like this piece a lot. I too just want people to love me for me, not because of something I wear, do, or have.

                                      Dawn

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3 posted 2001-11-27 12:58 PM


exactly i am me and that's all i can be!

titus is mine and mine only!!! *glares at rhonda*
I CAN DO ALL THINGS THROUGH CHRIST WHO STREGTHENS ME! PHILIPPIANS 4:13
love me for i am PUNK!

punkrockerrobin
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4 posted 2001-11-28 04:55 AM


i guess no one else liked this poem  

titus is mine and mine only!!! *glares at rhonda*
I CAN DO ALL THINGS THROUGH CHRIST WHO STREGTHENS ME! PHILIPPIANS 4:13
love me for i am PUNK!

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5 posted 2001-11-28 04:56 AM


You know, i do like the poem a lot but it kind of contradicts itself. You say you want to be loved for being you, but must u be classified as "punk". What IS punk?
If anything, and anything being love...the guy should love you for Robin being Robin, not Robin being punk.
A poem well done.  

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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6 posted 2001-11-28 09:14 AM


I don't really care about the superficial stuff... I just like you. How could anyone not?!   and I like your poems too  
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7 posted 2001-11-29 03:33 PM


awwwwwwww tks sea!!

dopes i think you need to read it again!! but thanks yall are sweet to me!!

titus is mine and mine only!!! *glares at rhonda*
I CAN DO ALL THINGS THROUGH CHRIST WHO STREGTHENS ME! PHILIPPIANS 4:13
love me for i am PUNK!

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