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lone_poet707
Member
since 2001-11-17
Posts 70
black hole named Aylmer

0 posted 2001-11-25 09:17 PM


I now have the strength
to wipe the slate
clean, it's not
too late.
To what length
must I go to unravel
this tightly bound knot
deep within my soul, my mind?
Beneath this cheerful
facade, I travel
in search of a sign, some kind
of reassurance that these painful
scars have healed,
Proving one more chapter in this life has sealed.

© Copyright 2001 Joe Hawley-Shepherd - All Rights Reserved
SmileyClar
Junior Member
since 2001-11-23
Posts 16
nowhere anymore
1 posted 2001-11-25 11:19 PM


I LOVE it! I actually printed it off and posted it in my room. I also sent as a greeting to my gal pals. YAY for you who can look back on whats happened and call it finished. I know some of my friends and I wish we could do this... (guys... ugh)

I think its really well-written and really explains the idea well.

~SmileyClar~

Yoda
Junior Member
since 2001-11-28
Posts 19

2 posted 2001-11-28 06:11 PM


WOW!!!! How has THIS poem slipped through the cracks? Oh no. I must send it back to the top. It's beautiful. I loved it! Thank you for sharing. And hang in there.. the peace you seek will come with time and understanding.



You know its been a good day when you come home, realize you forgot your key again, and decide to climb through the doggie door instead of complaining

[This message has been edited by Yoda (edited 11-28-2001).]

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