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Zukene_Chic
Member

since 2001-09-26

Posts 152
Cali

0 posted 2001-11-25 08:21 PM

This, like "Will it end" is about my "problems." Though its about who my problem is, not fixing it. And, yes, this was made with quotes from songs, books, and other things. I hope you enjoy.

-For "Seth"-

To the muse:
Do you remember
"Once upon a time"?
When I tried to have
A father, but had
A dad instead.
Your so (Freaking)special,
I wish I was special.
Oh muse-
Tell me of the man of many wiles.
Of his hardships,
And of his true love.
Is the city I live in
The city of angels?
We are the song makers,
And we are the dreamers
Of all beautiful dreams.
Your tounge is twisted,
And your eyes are slit.
You need a gaurdian.

Everyone will remember...

I'm counting U.F.O's,
I signal them with my lighter.
My bones are tired, daddy.
Life up your skirt a little more,
Show the world to me.

And then...

Behind the bonehouse,
I'll show you my dark secret.
Dont listen to my shrink.
Its friday and I'm in love.
I prommis you,
I will treat you well,
My sweet angel.
You are like my favorite
Pair of Dungarees.
So help me Jesus.
I'm me, (dangit), ME!
Who else do you want me to be?

I'll never forget...

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

1 posted 2001-11-26 01:18 PM

intruiging read....it's making me really think a lot
thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

2 posted 2001-11-26 01:36 PM

the inclusion of lines from a number of songs made this a particularly interesting read. i liked the structure you used a lot, that in particular got my attention.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Acies

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2001-11-30 06:59 PM

bumping for others to read

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?

vixengrl04
Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

4 posted 2001-11-30 08:56 PM

Hey this was really cool. You combined a lot of stuff that I wouldn't otherwise imagine putting together, but you pulled it off!! Great work!

~*Nikki*~

     *~Fighting for your love~*
    *~Is something I cannot do~*
   *~I'm not good enough to win~*
*~And I'm not strong enough to lose~*

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