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Knight of Secrecy
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since 2001-10-12

Posts 113
San Juan, Puerto Rico

0 posted 2001-11-25 05:07 PM

Blindfolds (Paused Things)

I scream and blind death
blindfolds give me a head start
I run, slide and fall flat
Three seconds abandoned me,
Still I'm within death's reach

My skin escapes from me
Deep in it craves for thee
Later events die for you
and I scream for I don't know you

Blindfolds at my grave
Slaying my love decayed
Briefing the troops for war
Sending their breath so far

Escaping an Awakened Dream
Scrolling ways of broken paths
Shifted Kings, paused things,
Tie this knouts for the mind
is to weak and blinded to dream.

-C.M.

"I feel the sting of an insignificant wasp, and yet, I fear that I am alergic"

K. Rebel
Junior Member

since 2001-10-21

Posts 40
San Juan, PR

1 posted 2001-11-25 07:53 PM

Well Carlos, this poem just makes me want to cry and laugh at the same time because of part of what it was about, (just in case, part of it is about a really bad experience we had in a car accident the other day). Anyways a great poem, a great way to express this things that are going on man.

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

2 posted 2001-11-27 09:24 PM

this was amazing!
thats all i can say
boxer boy

yellow *********
Regina

Yoda
Junior Member

since 2001-11-28

Posts 19

3 posted 2001-11-28 05:49 PM

I got a message from it, but I doubt it's what you intended. Doesn't really matter though. You still wrote a really good poem, and I still enjoyed it. So it's all good.

Thanks for sharing a piece of yourself with us all.

You know its been a good day when you come home, realize you forgot your key again, and decide to climb through the doggie door instead of complaining

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-11-29 09:46 AM

I can't figure out what you mean at all....I like the way you worded it though...sorry, I don't always get this kind of poetry....maybe you wouldn't mind elaborating on its meaning for me???

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2001-11-29 10:13 AM

Im not even shur what to say about this...i got so many mixed feelings while reading it. I couldn decide wether its a sad poem..or if it was provoking or humorous in a way...im so confused!!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

6 posted 2001-11-30 12:16 PM

ok ok...im reading and replying c!
i read that poem...and i read it over again and again and again.... and i read what danny wrote...and still didnt understand half of the symbols you used. *cough*explaination*ahem*please*cough*
i loved the way you wrote it though...the confusion of the piece added to the "blindfolded" effect. i liked the read loads- ill be back for the explaination buddy....keep writing..

i luve mi con-tray! lyke a big an brown stetch olan wiv losa sun!

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