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-Myriad-
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since 2001-11-24
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0 posted 2001-11-24 04:23 PM


Winter grows within the silent world
A dream through rayments of ice.
Snow falls gently from above
And stirs the frail world into endless dreams.
Once, time posessed a memory
Betrayed by its existence
Forgotten now, eternal lost
Looking back
Only ebony.

And night, reflecting light as falling glass,
Was broken by the sound of distant footsteps.


-Myriad-

Infinitum...

© Copyright 2001 -Myriad- - All Rights Reserved
knightlyshadows
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since 2001-04-14
Posts 791
obscured vision
1 posted 2001-11-24 04:42 PM


wow i liked this alot. very nicely done. you did a great job on it.

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“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

I know Im not perfect but I can smile
& I hope that you c this heart behind my tired eyes

DawnG
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2 posted 2001-11-24 10:21 PM


Myriad,

This is a great poem. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Welcome to Passions. I hope you enjoy your stay here with us as much as we will enjoy having you.

Please check your e mail for a special message.

                                  Dawn

EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
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Here, Now, Forever
3 posted 2001-11-25 01:09 PM


Myriad, I see Myriad amounts of potential in your poetic skill. WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! (boy I love saying that)
This work leaves me a warm feeling

Dopey Dope
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4 posted 2001-11-28 04:36 AM


A poem with true beauty. The way you expressed this was wonderful. You wrote this quite well. I look forward to more of your work.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

banburycross
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since 2001-03-27
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viginia
5 posted 2001-11-28 01:38 PM


you have a lot of talent and i look forward to reading more of your work and watching you develop more as a poet.  you use some really beautiful images in this, i liked it a lot.  keep posting your work, and keep replying as well.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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