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cutiepiesugarbabie
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 110
A Cloud In the Sky

0 posted 2002-06-22 08:51 PM


I want out
out of here
Need to leave
leave, go far away
Away from everyone
everyone and everything
Everytihng that has caused pain
pain so great i can't feel
feel anything any longer
Longer i wait
wait to go crazy
crazy I am
I am alone
Alone on my own
own terms
terms not to be questioned
questioned by no one
no one listens no one knows
knows me
me just I
I alone know what
what its like to be me
be me try
try for a little while
While i take a break
break from me
me no more

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Neosaphire
Junior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 20
Oklahoma City
1 posted 2002-06-22 10:47 PM


::traces the pattern of words:: ooo...this is fun....
cutiepiesugarbabie
Member
since 2002-06-07
Posts 110
A Cloud In the Sky
2 posted 2002-06-23 10:18 AM


lol thanks for responding to all my poems

o*~Everyone makes mistakes at one time or another...what separates the weak from the strong is who can learn from them and continue one, then make dif

cutiepiesugarbabie
Member
since 2002-06-07
Posts 110
A Cloud In the Sky
3 posted 2002-06-23 10:18 AM


lol thanks for responding to all my poems

o*~Everyone makes mistakes at one time or another...what separates the weak from the strong is who can learn from them and continue one, then make dif

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Posts 7665
Twilight Zone
4 posted 2002-06-25 10:15 AM


very interesting read cutiepie
i applaud the whole write
thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


songsoftheaftermath
Member
since 2002-06-19
Posts 84
a world of disarray
5 posted 2002-06-26 03:27 AM


"Longer i wait
wait to go crazy
crazy I am
I am alone "

i can relate to this a lot. sometimes ppl need to take breaks...breaks from themselves...from their friends...from their boyfriends...from life in itself. this is a good expression of feeling. keep writing chicka.

could the darkness be my friend?

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