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Roses ( an Acrostic by and eight year old! )
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Roses ( an Acrostic by and eight year old! ) |
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Violet Tulips New Member
since 2001-11-24
Posts 2 |
Roses Roses are red, white or blue- kinda just like you! Odd or even coloured, nice or bad Sometimes even hiding a prickly thorn or two Especially nice for when I'm feeling sad Soft and pretty. Do I want one? Yes, please, I DO! I hope you liked my poem ENJOY! . . . . . . . . . ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Cherish: This was written by my 8 year old niece ( the youngest member of pip!  ). She's sitting beside me with the biggest smile on her face. It's one of her first pieces and let me tell you- she's taken a shine to poetry. i hope you guys give her a warm reception (smileys smileys smileys!), and like she said :"Enjoy!"[This message has been edited by Violet Tulips (edited 11-24-2001).] |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
hey sweetie!  you KNOW how much i LOOOVE this! Its absoludedly WONDERFUL!(ABSoludedly!) im so proud of you Nesrin. Welcome Sweetie!!  i hope you write many many more, lovely princess  i luve mi con-tray! lyke a big an brown stetch olan wiv losa sun! [This message has been edited by cherish (edited 11-24-2001).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to 'our' family! I really enjoyed this - and acrostics are HARD to do sometimes but you did a great job. Please check your email we have sent you something special!  |
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ForeverMyOwn Junior Member
since 2001-11-23
Posts 13Brighton, MI |
Excellent work young one, especially for your age. I encourage you to keep them coming. Evil, real evil, is the taking of a human life. Whether a man would be dying, even eventually… it doesn’t matter. If God does exist… this life, every |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Violet Tulips!  What a lovely acrostic poem! It's wonderful to read your thoughts in this piece, and I sure hope to read more! Welcome, Welcome! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
How nice to have you here, Violet Tulips - We absolutely love to have young poets join us here at Passions - I hope you have some more great poetry to share with us...  |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! Absolutely a wonderful first post That is such a cute poem Definitely put a smile on my face  Thanks for sharing and joining us here in PIP Hope you enjoy  là où est mon amour? |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Violet Tulips, This is a great job you have done here. I enjoy writing acrostics too, but I'm much older than you are. Acrostics are hard for me, you did a great job. Welcome to Passions. I'm sorry I missed your poem earlier sweety, but I was away from my computer all day. LOL. Dawn |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
an 8 year old?! omi! This is really great for an 8 your old! hey sweety! Nice job! i hope i see Bunches more from you! im adding this to my library! Welcome! If at first you don't succeed, destroy all evidence that you tried. |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
WONDERFUL!!! This is great for your age, hon. I think you have a real talent. Just keep it up and write from your heart. I've found out the hard way that what you feel is never wrong... Especially if it makes a good poem. I am very proud of you! And I sure hope to see more soon! |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
AWWWWWWWW WELCOME!!!! This was really super!!! Great work. Jenn "I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
Woo! Hey kiddo, this was very very good! Welcome to PIP, I hope to read more of your stuff. -Adam "Diplomacy is the art of saying 'Nice Doggy' while you search for a rock." - Will Rogers |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
You've touched my heart little sprout. My smile will never dissapear, and my soul will never cease to remember this poem. Truly, in all simplicity, I loved it. You did well, and I hope to see you post more. Welcome to Passions!!! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Violet Tulips- Wonderful job on this! You've gotten off to a great start here, and I hope to see more poetry from you. Welcome! Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
i liked this poem a lot! great work! robin repeat after me: punk is the best music ever created! |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS IN POETRY!!!!! This is a wonderful post, sweetie! It's wonderful that you decided to join us here in PIP. I'm sure you'll have fun You are a talented young lady! I hope to read more from you soon. --Marie If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
 Welcome to Passions!! It is always great to see more members join us, especially the younger ones. You can give the oldies in here a run for their money.  A wonderful first post to be extremely proud of. I look forward to seeing many more from you in the future. ~AF~ If this is all the world has to offer, I want a refund on my life. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! VIOLET TULIPS-- IT IS SO NICE TO HAVE YOU AS A PART OF OUR PIP FAMILY HERE!!! YOUR VERY TALENTED AND YOUR POEM WAS ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL...I LOVE ROSES TOO HEHEHE...CANT WAIT TO READ MORE FROM YOU!!!! WELCOME AGAIN!ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
Great poem for an 8 year old. I hop your career in poetry is an outstanding one. Poetry is spiritual ventilation! |
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Autumn Child New Member
since 2001-12-31
Posts 5 |
I love roses!! Red especially this made me feel happy "Great things are done, when men and mountains meet." ~William Blake |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
An adorable poem! Welcome Honey! No doubt you will be a poet full of many treasures! Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Awww this was ADOREABLE!!!! =) Makes me feel all warm and fuzzy!!! Kristen |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
this is violet tulips here..(i dont know where i put her password...so here is her reply) Nesrin says: To ALL: Thank you for giving me a warm welcome to passions(to which I go:thats great ). I hope you enjoy my next poems, once I post them up! Im also looking forward to growing up as big as you and calling you sweetie pies!(to which i give her a strange look  )till next time, keep smiling!  Love ya! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Zombie |
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