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EternalDragon
New Member

since 2001-11-23

Posts 2

0 posted 2001-11-23 06:08 PM

Thats wat we say,
when people look our way.
Will we ever play,
in the suns golden rays,
for more than a day?

They smile and whisper,
but you think im paranoid.
what thoughts can occur,
when my mind is a void?

As you walk this way,
whats on my mind?
What will you say,
will it be kind?

I wish i knew,
how wl it end?
will i get a clue,
can we be more than just friends?

Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

1 posted 2001-11-23 07:55 PM

Hmmm...I might not be as flashy as Cherish but...

WELCOME TO PIP "ETERNALDRAGON!"!!
I'll be sure to check out each and every one of your posts! I hope you'll find it as friendly here as I do...and if you don't---I'll have a few PiPs to talk to...

Man...I really liked this! I loved it heaps! ^_^ I also really liked the last stanza. (I think it's called!) Sure, some of us might have been here for longer...but we're all newbies at heart! Be sure to stop by the discussion forums so we can learn more about you! ^_^

Oh, and..."join" the Space Pirates!

(Man...I need Cherish here to do the welcome right...)

~ Alex

P.S- No matter what...never be afraid to post here! I feel your emotions concerning this poem! You're never alone!

"Fighting was the only thing I was good at...but I at least I always fought for what I beleived in..."

[This message has been edited by Android 17 (edited 11-23-2001).]

SmileyClar
Junior Member

since 2001-11-23

Posts 16
nowhere anymore

2 posted 2001-11-23 09:19 PM

WOW Great writing. This is so me here. Its not even funny how close this hits. Im glad Im not the only one in my situation.

~SmileyClar~

EternalDragon
New Member

since 2001-11-23

Posts 2

3 posted 2001-11-23 10:17 PM

Hey, thanks a lot, i was nervous at first when my friend told me aout this site, bu ur input is very helpful, i hope you enjoy some of my other work i'll be submitting later.

thanks

p.s.- I will also be writing under the name ForeverMyOwn.

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

4 posted 2001-11-23 11:17 PM

Eternaldragon,

First of all let me welcome you to Passions. I hope you enjoy it here as much as we will enjoy having you here.

Your first poem which you have graced us with is superb and I hope someday you can be more than just friends with this person if that is what is best for both of you. But one of my best friends is a male and I'm female and I wouldn't trade our friendship for the world.

Please chack your e mail for a special greeting.

Dawn

Elvenblood
Member

since 2001-02-17

Posts 409
Maine, USA

5 posted 2001-11-24 10:44 AM

Wow, that poem just stood out to me because of my present situation! I hope to see more good writing!

Bryan "Tarquin" Holmes

No angels in heaven nor demons below the sea, could ever dissever my soul from the soul of the beautiful Annabel Lee

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

6 posted 2001-11-24 10:06 PM

Great first poem I'm sure a lot of people can relate to it.Keep up the awsome work I can't wait to read more of your poems.
Lauren

Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

7 posted 2001-11-25 06:33 PM

oh, wow, I love this. Great first post

If I held a star everytyme
he made me smile,I'd have the
evening sky in my palm, if
one was removed for every tear
he caused, I'd be emptyhanded.

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

8 posted 2001-11-28 04:40 AM

I though you wrote this just fine. Well done on the poem and Welcome to Passions.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

9 posted 2001-12-26 05:13 AM

EternalDragon-
Very nicely written piece here.
I'll be looking for more of your work.
Welcome!
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

10 posted 2001-12-26 05:38 AM

i liked this poem a lot! great work!
robin

repeat after me: punk is the best music ever created!

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

11 posted 2001-12-26 01:25 PM

Welcome to Passions in Poetry!

I really enjoyed this first post. A very well-written poem to get yourself started here. I can tell I'm going to like you

But just remember, replying to other's poems is important in the forum, too. Wonderful work!
and again, welcome!

--Marie

If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway.

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