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Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08

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Brooksville, Fl, U.S

0 posted 2001-11-22 01:49 AM

If I have to live
It won't be until i kiss
That special butterfly
My Goddess of the sky.

If I have to leave
It won't be until i see
My butterfly land atop the
Black rose that is I
My Goddess of the sky.

If I have to die
It won't be until i touch
That butterfly I love so much
My Goddess of the sky.

And if I have to wait
At your gates
My Goddess of the sky
To confront my butterfly
Then i will gladly
Live, leave, and die
for I have felt my
Butterfly
And now hold her inside.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

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Posts 664
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1 posted 2001-11-22 11:09 AM

Oooh! This one's different! Mesa likey!!!

"Fighting was the only thing I was good at...but I at least I always fought for what I beleived in..."

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2 posted 2001-11-22 01:33 PM

Nice one.

Everyone has a soulmate...you'll find your butterfly.

Jenn

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

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since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
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3 posted 2001-11-22 11:38 PM

Jeremiah,

This is beautiful. I hope you find your soulmate very soon.

Dawn

Barelybreathing
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 46

4 posted 2001-11-23 01:13 AM

this is real sweet ..luved it..

'The greatest thing in the world is to know how to be one's own.'
~Montaigne~

stace_co2003
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since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

5 posted 2001-11-23 10:26 AM

wow, that is so cute!! *sighs* I wish I could find my soulmate...that'd be awesome!

*~*Love is the key that can unlock your happiness...to truly love, is to love yourself*~*

vixengrl04
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since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

6 posted 2001-11-23 10:30 AM

Wow, I liked this one alot!!! Great metaphor with the butterfly and everything. Hope you catch yours!!

~*Nikki*~

     *~Fighting for your love~*
    *~Is something I cannot do~*
   *~I'm not good enough to win~*
*~And I'm not strong enough to lose~*

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The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2001-11-23 10:16 PM

Hey Jeremiah, this is beautiful, glad I found it over here. I know you will find your Goddess.
Sandra

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