navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #5 » You.....
Teen Poetry #5
Post A Reply Post New Topic You..... Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
luckyducky_505
Member
since 2001-04-29
Posts 53
Kentucky, USA

0 posted 2001-11-21 05:22 PM



I sit and think about....
You
You and your face
You, your face, and your smile.

I sit and stare into space just listening to....
You
You and your voice
You, your voice, and your laugh.

I sit and listen and stare....
You
You and your face
You, your face,and your smile.
You
You and your voice
You, your voice, and your laugh.

I just like to sit and ponder everything about you because I love you now and forever.

If you wanna be somebody, If you wanna go somewhere, you gotta wake-up and pay attention. ~Sister Act 2~
~Whoopi Goldberg~

© Copyright 2001 Tiffany L. McDonald - All Rights Reserved
luvnkris
Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 144
Perth, Australia
1 posted 2001-11-21 08:02 PM


Thats sweet   glad to see you've found someone you feel that way about!
Luv Jo
xoxo

* never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you*



Alyssa
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385
IM ENGAGED!!!!!
2 posted 2001-11-21 08:09 PM


I know how this goes hehe
Loved the piece!

I LuV 2 fReAk out saLEpeEpZ. ThEy AsK me If tHey CaN heLp Me, & I sAy,'HaVe U gOT NEthINg Id like?'TheN thEy aSk mE wuT sIZe I sAy "X-tr MedIuM"

AngelPoet87
Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280
Indy
3 posted 2001-11-21 08:31 PM


This is really good. That format rocks, breaking it down and bringing it all together in the end. How great!

Liefhe alle ten spijte van duivel... A tes souhaits... A tes amours... Qu ils restent. J'ai t'adore. Je t'aime.

Lisa_bebe15
Member
since 2001-11-15
Posts 151
Florida
4 posted 2001-11-23 10:19 PM


I love it..I feel the same way about my b/f Jeffy..We are so close...Most of my poems are based on the realtionship we have..

"Water Over Matter"

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #5 » You.....

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary