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What Do You Do? |
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gymnast Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 80Scotland. |
What do you do when your life is a mess? Filled with the troubles of teenage stree. Whether it's bullying, violence or loss of a loved one, Don't sit aroung moping, talk to someone. Never worry, never fear, Don't you know that someones here. Can't you see it'll all be fine, If you talk to someone like Childline. They'll sort it out in such hurry There'll be no time to sit and worry. See what did I tell you, it's all done. So now you can go back to having fun! What do you do when your friends are away? Leaving you alone for one whole day. Do you sit around moping or try to have fun? Don't you realise there's things to be done. Going to thelibrary, making new friends. The list could go on for days on end. There are hundreds of things to see and do, Come on I'll show you, just me and you. It's your choice you see, Have fun with me, Or stay all alone. I can't decide which would it be? Stay on your own or have fun with me? What do you do when things can't get worse? It's begining to feel like one long and bad curse. Do you try to hide and not show your face, Almost as if you are there in disgrace? Or do you hold your head high, Till it reaches the sky? Just between me and you... I'll tell you what I'd do. I'd hold my head high till it reaches the sky. If you can work out why, Then give it a try. |
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luckyducky_505 Member
since 2001-04-29
Posts 53Kentucky, USA |
This is great!! i love it! welcome!! If you wanna be somebody, If you wanna go somewhere, you gotta wake-up and pay attention. ~Sister Act 2~ |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
wow this is a really good piece! I hope to see more from you! I LuV 2 fReAk out saLEpeEpZ. ThEy AsK me If tHey CaN heLp Me, & I sAy,'HaVe U gOT NEthINg Id like?'TheN thEy aSk mE wuT sIZe I sAy "X-tr MedIuM" |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Gymnast, This is a very deep poem. I loved the message you have shared with us here. Please forgive me in taking so long to welcome you to Passions. I have been very busy the past few days. I hope you enjoy your stay with us as much as we will enjoy having you. Please check your e mail for a special message. Dawn |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Wow..... very deep poem I loved it because I can relate to what your poem is saying.But anyway keep up the awsome work and I can't wait to read more of your poems. Lauren |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
"Just between me and you... I'll tell you what I'd do. I'd hold my head high till it reaches the sky. If you can work out why, Then give it a try." OOOOooooooOOOO! i loved the message within this piece gymnast....really inspirational    Welcome Layla! i hope you enjoy being here and reading poetry..most of all i hope you enjoy sharing and growing as a poet within these walls..  |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought you expressed this fine. Nice poem here  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
you had a good message in this piece. welcome to passions. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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