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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
Well, this poem reflects...what---what I dream about. What I want in life...and breifly discusses why it's so had for me to make dreams... Dreams of a Small Boy- I dream of a loving family, One that I could come home to... One to play and laugh with... One that I could call my very own... I dream of a father, One who'd take me on fishing trips... One whom I could talk to about anything... One that I could call my very own... I dream of a girlfriend, One who'd like me for who I am... One who I could take out on dates... One that I could call my very own... I dream of a best friend, One who I could trust... One who would help me out in times of doubt... One that I could call my very own... I dream of happiness, Happiness that comes in infinite ammounts... Happiness that always leaves a smile on my face. Happines...that I could call my very own. I dream of a small boy, One that's stricken with fear when his mother gets angry... One that has no father, family, best friend or happiness... A small boy...who just wants to be loved... "If I could count every thought that I think of her, there'd be more than the sands on the shore!" |
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Missthang Member
since 2001-07-03
Posts 103 |
awwww!! i love this poem, it's full of so much emotion. i feel for you, i really do and i send my love. as i was reading this, i thought about all the little things that i complain about. then i realized that some people wish they had the life that i had. i guess i never realized that there are a lot of people who live "rougher" lives that me. hang in there, your happiness will soon come. "Whatever you are doing, love yourslef for doing it. |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
Thanks...it's nice to know that someone cares... "Fighting was the only thing I was good at...but I at least I always fought for what I beleived in..." |
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gymnast Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 80Scotland. |
I honestly thought that this poem was really good! I'm new to this site but this is a really sweet poem-i can really identify with it! Luv~Amanda~  |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
oh heeey....  ....this is so sad kiddo...you know those dreams are achievable...well some of them at least. you KNOW im here for you. i loved the poem heaps alex..i love the repetition and the way you held the format all the way through and concluded it differently. i thought that that was a very nice touch....keep them coming little one...  |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
hey kid....tough sitiuation....you know I'm there. -Adam |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
Thanks Amanda! Welcome to Pip! And Adam...Cherish---thanks so much! It's so hard to dream when people go out of their way to hurt you. And destroy your dreams...so that's why if I do dream---I try not to tell anyone! Thanks you guys! This is one of my most emotionfelt poems yet... |
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HeAvEnS AnGeL Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 168The Hot Girl From Canada |
Great write hun. Sumtimes life can get tough but you'll always pull through If you ever need to talk email me at cinderella_1872001@hotmail.com
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Hey Deary.  Glad ya pointed me in this direction..I don't come to Teen 5 much now...So I might have missed it!  Anywho... I liked the read bunches! Loved the change at the end... So jam-packed with emotion, It bummed me out! Awesome write though. More I say! (Just tell me when you post more...lol...so i don't miss it.) Good friends are hard to find, harder to leave, and impossible to |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
I liked this alot, but it was so sad. Please don't ever give up on your dreams. Even if it seems like ppl go out of their way to destroy them, that should be more motivation 4 u 2 achieve them, right? I hope that you achieve your dreams!!! Good luck.  ~*Nikki*~ *~Fighting for your love~* |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Nice write. Deepfelt emotion; you layed your feelings bare for us to se...which is very dangerous, I know. Sometimes, that's the best way to truely see yourself and others. Anyway, great work, you're a great guy, and I'm looking forward to getting to know ya. Late Sincerely, Titus |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
I know laying my feelings out is dangerous...but---I...I'm sick of hiding. I'm sick of hiding form everybody...I want to show everything I have! And if I'm malisciously beaten...then so be it. Thanks y'all...this gives me so much encouragement! And I really want to get to know you better too Titus! "Fighting was the only thing I was good at...but I at least I always fought for what I beleived in..." |
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-Myriad- New Member
since 2001-11-24
Posts 6Canada |
Dreams...inconsistent things. When posessed by a child, indeed, they are full of hope. A touching poem. Don't be afraid to share with us, we are all here for you, even if we are strangers. I hope you continue to shine a little light into the world, even if you have been through life's darker side. Darkness makes the flame glow brighter. *smiles* -Myriad- Infinitum |
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