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SunShine913
since 2001-08-19
Posts 211Italy but from NC 
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This is really short and really not how im none to write but i thought it was a lil out thier.. hehe i was sleeping i wook up to write this .. kinda funny huh?? well thanks for reading ... Secret Weapon I have tattooed poetry beneath my glitter polished nails so that when I run my fingers casually through your hair my emotions will osmosize into your brain. *!~!* Andrea *!~!* |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
What a cool idea! The concept I mean! lol It's pretty sweet too. I think with a lot of people though you wouldn't need the words on your fingers, and that they'd figure it out just by how you're running them through their hair. That made very little sense but that's ok, anywya, cool post! I like it Bryan No angels in heaven nor demons below the sea, could ever dissever my soul from the soul of the beautiful Annabel Lee |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Andrea, I'm glad you woke up to write this. This is a very humerous poem. Definately got a chuckle out of me today. Dawn |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Hmmm...you know I really liked this. Cool concept. I love the length, it added impact. Jenn "I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
this is nifty beans! I LuV 2 fReAk out saLEpeEpZ. ThEy AsK me If tHey CaN heLp Me, & I sAy,'HaVe U gOT NEthINg Id like?'TheN thEy aSk mE wuT sIZe I sAy "X-tr MedIuM" |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
I dunno...I don't really see the huge humor in it as everyone else did...I just found it as a "funky" and yet kinda abstract way of writing a though...PRetty cool in my opinion. I liked this one alot actually, despite it's short length..lol "I'd rather die purposely alone than to have lived an accidental life of solitude."- Jesa "§ùgã®" Thompson |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
COOL! I really liked this!!! ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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