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Zengo
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0 posted 2001-11-21 02:54 AM


This popped in my head like 10 minutes ago and it came out like this....See what you think!

Black and Blue,
The colors of a scared soul,
This spectacle comes into your life,
And no matter how hard you try,
It some how overwhelms you,
To the point of no return,
Constant thoughts of yesterday,
That something of magic,
That we shared,
Lingers for impossible possibilities,
The faith of truly loving,
What you can't have,
Constant thoughts of you,
When nothing stands for something,
Something is apart of everything,
Everything reminds me of nothing,
When something can't stand for nothing,
All things remind me of you,
I'm like an old puzzle,
Perfect with you,
And worthless without you,
For the missing piece,
Of my soul only you can complete...


© Copyright 2001 Nicholas Wright - All Rights Reserved
TopGunLauren
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1 posted 2001-11-21 02:59 AM


WOw... great poem it is really powerful I love it.Keep up the great work I can't wait to read more.
  Lauren

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2 posted 2001-11-21 01:37 PM


I have to agree, Great poem.

                               Dawn

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3 posted 2001-11-21 10:13 PM


I second that (or third that or w/e)

I LuV 2 fReAk out saLEpeEpZ. ThEy AsK me If tHey CaN heLp Me, & I sAy,'HaVe U gOT NEthINg Id like?'TheN thEy aSk mE wuT sIZe I sAy "X-tr MedIuM"

Zengo
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4 posted 2001-11-24 04:02 PM


Thanks alot all...

Nick

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