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TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 718
California

0 posted 2001-11-20 10:40 PM


No matter what I do I can't seem to be happy,
What is wrong with me?

There is to much on my mind at all times of the day,
Sometimes I wonder if this pain will ever go away.

But no one cares about me or how I feel,
There lives revolve around themselves they are too busy to deal with me.

It's a horrible feeling knowing you are all alone in the world,
Even if there is a bunch of people around you at all times.

But I have to stay strong for everyone else,
Because I can't stop being a friend to them.

I live my life for everyone but myself which is hard,
Because I refuse to hurt people the way they hurt me.

But all I can do is hope one day things will get better,
Who knows maybe one day?

    Lauren



© Copyright 2001 TopGunLauren - All Rights Reserved
DawnG
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since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494
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1 posted 2001-11-20 11:50 PM


Lauren,

I was exactly where you are a little over a year ago. I can tell you that things do get better. The first thing you need to do is learn that you are important. You are important to if no on else, a lot of us here at Pip. This is a very well written poem.

I know you don't know me, but I have been where you are and if you want to talk, please feel free to e mail me.

                                 Dawn

SunShine913
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since 2001-08-19
Posts 211
Italy but from NC
2 posted 2001-11-21 10:36 AM


hey baby gurl~!
     i know i havent been around but what happened?? i like your poem .. but im more worried about you~!
     you should make sure your happy before anyone else i understand you are a wonderful person . but that wonderful person needs to be happy~! but im always here if you need to talk .. LILtazz24@aol.com

ok??

            *!~!* Andrea *!~!*    

stace_co2003
Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497
In a dream world
3 posted 2001-11-21 10:17 PM



I dunno what to say, except people do care about you, I promise!!!!

*~*Love is the key that can unlock your happiness...to truly love, is to love yourself*~*

AngelPoet87
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since 2001-04-21
Posts 280
Indy
4 posted 2001-11-21 10:26 PM


*nods* people care about you, and I am here whenever you need to talk. I like the poem, though, but I hope things look up.

Liefhe alle ten spijte van duivel... A tes souhaits... A tes amours... Qu ils restent. J'ai t'adore. Je t'aime.

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