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Lisa_bebe15
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since 2001-11-15
Posts 151
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0 posted 2001-11-20 09:07 AM


Every time I see your face,
Every time I hear your voice,
I feel so safe inside
Nothing can happen to me when I am with you.

You protect me from my fears and my nightmares
You wipe every tear I cry away
And keep them in your pocket, for something else worth to cry about.

When I am in your arms,
It’s like a blanket
So warm and protecting
That can wrap around me
And keep me warm and safe.

So warm and safe
When I am with you
No one else gives me this feeling
But you
Only you!

In my head
My dreams
You love me.
That’s why I trust you,
That’s why I love you.

"Water Over Matter"

© Copyright 2001 Lisa Ann - All Rights Reserved
DawnG
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1 posted 2001-11-20 12:03 PM


It's nice to be in love. I can't wait to have that feeling again.

                              Dawn

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2 posted 2001-11-20 04:31 PM


such a sweet poem
seems like this person is a keeper
thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?


SunShine913
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3 posted 2001-11-20 05:17 PM


a sweet sweet peom .. not my fav of yours but keep writing ..

            *!~!* Andrea *!~!*    

Alyssa
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4 posted 2001-11-20 06:57 PM


Yes i liked this but not one of your best.
Very cute though!

I LuV 2 fReAk out saLEpeEpZ. ThEy AsK me If tHey CaN heLp Me, & I sAy,'HaVe U gOT NEthINg Id like?'TheN thEy aSk mE wuT sIZe I sAy "X-tr MedIuM"

Poet on Acid
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5 posted 2001-11-20 10:10 PM


I liked this. It was very sweet. I tend to lean toward the darker side of life in my writing, but I love to read a poem about love and trust. Thank you for posting.

"It is better to have loved and lost than to have never have loved at all" ...but the pain of both is equally unbearable...

Poet on Acid
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since 2001-01-07
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6 posted 2001-11-20 10:10 PM


I liked this. It was very sweet. I tend to lean toward the darker side of life in my writing, but I love to read a poem about love and trust. Thank you for posting.

"It is better to have loved and lost than to have never have loved at all" ...but the pain of both is equally unbearable...

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