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Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

0 posted 2001-11-19 05:55 PM

A+B=C

When I hear those people
say, "you complete me"
I feel sad
How can someone complete you?
You have to be whole all by yourself
Your heart stays broken
but the world keeps moving
a dizzy, spinning sensation
makes me fall to my knees
crying out to you
because i think you complete
im wrong
A+B=C
me+you= a whole new circle
we can't complete one another
how would that be love?
"you saved me from my self"
I can be incomplete
and so can you
but will never reach
the seperate being
like that
I'm becoming a full being
we both are
because i know
It will be
indepent+independent=complete
We have different hearts
yet we share them
through our words
because you, my love
and me
are
A+B=C

Regina 2001

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

1 posted 2001-11-19 06:37 PM

I liked this a lot. It reminds me of the Runaway Bride. You have to complete your "W".

Got to get the rest of your ducks in a row first.

Great job.

Jenn

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

Knight of Secrecy
Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 113
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-11-19 06:40 PM

"This is a great emotional poem, good concept.

-C.M.

K. Rebel
Junior Member

since 2001-10-21

Posts 40
San Juan, PR

3 posted 2001-11-19 09:57 PM

This an awesomely well written simple poem.
I like it.

Poet on Acid
Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 325
Florida, USA

4 posted 2001-11-19 10:51 PM

Algebra...damn it I just can't escape it can I? Now I'm stuck trying to figure out which is more complicated. Algebra or love. In any case I loved the poem.

"Appreciate your ability to forget...you'll need it when it's time to forgive"

Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

5 posted 2001-11-20 06:59 PM

very good idea in this regina...
i really liked it especially because I didn't really look at this before, but your poem is really inspiring

Salma

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

6 posted 2001-11-21 12:56 PM

this was nice regina. it made me stop and think. i liked this alot. great job
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

I know Im not perfect but I can smile
& I hope that you c this heart behind my tired eyes

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

7 posted 2001-11-23 10:35 AM

I see you've been spending some time thinking
thanks for sharing Ina
keep em coming

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?

vixengrl04
Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

8 posted 2001-11-23 11:06 AM

Ooooh I like this alot!!! Great work!!!

~*Nikki*~

     *~Fighting for your love~*
    *~Is something I cannot do~*
   *~I'm not good enough to win~*
*~And I'm not strong enough to lose~*

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

9 posted 2001-11-25 07:02 PM

Thank god! A girl with some sense about her! *Cheers*

I absolutely loved this, not just because it was free-verse...and I think those are perfect...lol...But Because your viewpoint wasn't your typical run-of-the-mill outlook on love. Awesome write here, Ina....I loved it bunches!

Good friends are hard to find, harder to leave, and impossible to
forget.

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