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Jessica
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0 posted 2001-11-18 11:13 PM



Only she knows her pain
Desperate heart crying aloud
In this oblivion of life
Finding her place in the crowd

Only she knows her pain
Pain of burning tears
Falling silently down her cheeks
From crumbling teenage years

Only she knows her pain
Wanting it all to go away
To let her be in private peace
Freeing tomorrow and yesterday

Only she knows her pain
Waking up alone at night
Wishing upon the brightest star
Praying for others sight

Only she knows her pain
Pain of what only she knows
Conquering questions within
The ones she dosen't show


What don't kill you can only make you stronger...

[This message has been edited by Jessica (edited 11-18-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-11-18 11:15 PM


Do you speak of yourself.. I feel you are a wonderful person.. thats a wonderful thing to pray for other's sight..although i suppose you cant help those complications that hinder it
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2 posted 2001-11-19 12:12 PM


Jessica,

If this is about you, I hope you can find a way to leave the pain behind and start enjoying life once again.

                            Dawn

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3 posted 2001-11-19 01:43 PM


Its true..only SHE knows her pain...strong piece..i enjoyed this lots!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

Kosetsu
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4 posted 2001-11-23 01:02 AM


*noddles* I remember when you wrote this one...kinda a good while back. You already know how I feel about it.  

-Adam

"Diplomacy is the art of saying 'Nice Doggy' while you search for a rock." - Will Rogers

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5 posted 2001-11-23 11:09 AM


Awwww this was really sad and sort of reminded me of myself in a way....I sincerely hope that you learn how 2 get past the pain, and find happiness in all that surrounds you.  Nice work, and good luck!!  

~*Nikki*~

     *~Fighting for your love~*
    *~Is something I cannot do~*
   *~I'm not good enough to win~*
*~And I'm not strong enough to lose~*

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6 posted 2001-11-23 03:19 PM


Very sad poem but I loved it keep up the great work.
Lauren

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7 posted 2001-11-28 12:36 PM


you should learn to rise up from anything
hope you do so soon
thanks for the read

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?


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