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SunShine913
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0 posted 2001-11-18 08:56 PM



Time knows no more than I,
Constant and mute to changes.
It is not time that changes the mind
But, sweet words, quick thoughts and pains.
A second and an eternity have equal share
If, in that time, I realize you care.

Do not use time to push me away
And dismiss my heartfelt plea.
I see the doubts that cast and stay
Because of prematurity.

Take my trembling hand and quivering lip
And let my tears reveal what you can't believe,
Because, your heart has broken bit by bit
And even yet.. continues to bleed.

Look into my eyes and listen, as I say with nervous breath,
that I open my heart to you, with a prayer above,
And expose what insecurity I have left
To tell you... you are really loved.


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this was done off my head~!!!!!! so please be careful with it

            *!~!* Andrea *!~!*    

© Copyright 2001 Andrea L. Figueroa - All Rights Reserved
Jenabou
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1 posted 2001-11-18 10:22 PM


Im really feelin this poem
been there times before myself
good work

The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle

EagleScorpion
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2 posted 2001-11-18 11:27 PM


man.... this was particularly good.. yes... yes it was very very good. VERY VERY good
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3 posted 2001-11-19 12:17 PM


It was very good. LOL

                         Dawn

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4 posted 2001-11-19 01:45 PM


I liked the idea that you were talking about...i took it that overall use your time wisely not to hurt people but to take advantage of the good things..im not shur if im right but..i enjoyed this a lot!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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5 posted 2001-12-24 01:16 AM


"A second and an eternity have equal share
If, in that time, I realize you care."

Hey deary!
As always, Kudos to you!
You are a awesome writer....I miss you in Teenchat though.. Hit me up on ICQ...I need the DL on whats going on in your lil world...

"I'd rather die purposely alone than to have lived an accidental life of solitude."- Jesa "§ùgã®" Thompson
  

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