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K. Rebel
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since 2001-10-21
Posts 40
San Juan, PR

0 posted 2001-11-17 12:15 PM


Running threw the aisles of disbelief
trying to find some truth in this world,
Dropping to this ground of shame,
losing myself threw the small minded.

Feeling as if I where the toy of the moment,
as if I where a game to amuse,
Strangely losing my mind
to the hell of words that consume me.

Lost in the battlefield of hope,
in my infinite boredome for evermore,
Regreting the love I felt for her,
Releasing myself from the pain of my heart.

Hoping the best of my future,
while I moan in my past,
Trying to find my path to the Sun,
while I drown in my misery.


Mariola my conversation with you inspired me on this one

© Copyright 2001 Danny Brown - All Rights Reserved
rolly_polly
Junior Member
since 2001-10-10
Posts 41
puerto rico
1 posted 2001-11-17 12:58 PM


Hey danny! nice poem man, just remeber to keep yer head up, you will be fine, i promise...just like i said live your life for tomorrow we die....so you just gotta keep at it.



~parallel universe~

EagleScorpion
Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever
2 posted 2001-11-18 11:13 PM


...yea... i share your feelings... many times I share these feelings with you
Knight of Secrecy
Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 113
San Juan, Puerto Rico
3 posted 2001-11-19 06:37 PM


This is a good poem, the best I have seen from you I think.

"When everything else fails, when you get to the bottomless pit, the only place to go, is up"

O como dice "Carpe Diem baby" de una tremenda banda,

"So wash your face away with dirt
It don't feel good until it hurts
So take this world and shake it
come squeeze and suck the day
Come make me miss you
Come carpe diem baby"

-C.M.

"I feel the sting of an insignificant wasp, and yet,  I fear that I am alergic"

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