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baby0508
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since 2001-05-16
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Moodus, Connecticut

0 posted 2001-11-16 01:03 PM


      Real Life Conondrum

You're more of a challange than I had expected
And now I'm lost at what to do.
I'm stuck in the midst of this problem,
And I'm slowly losing you.

I can't figure out your equation,
Am I doing something wrong?
I can't give up on this solution
But it's taking much too long.

You say I should give up
but I can't give up this fight
Because I soon may have the answer
And maybe it will be right.

Have you ever looked at this problem?
Tried to do it all alone?
Or am I left to discover
The solution on my own?

Please help me sholve this puzzle
And then maybe you will see
That because we worked together,
Our answer is "meant to be".

~*I hope you guys understood what I meant. Sometimes with a little help from the right person; the "equation" you found so hard might work out if you work together*~



© Copyright 2001 Heather - All Rights Reserved
vixengrl04
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since 2001-04-26
Posts 495
East Haddam, CT
1 posted 2001-11-17 10:09 AM


Hey Heather~
   I know that you already let me read this one yesterday, but I liked it alot so I thought that I would reply anyway!  As 4 ur conundrum: ur sooo right about some being waaaay 2 difficult to solve by urself, and I really hope that "he" helps u solve urs.  From the way it looked at the dance last night, things with that are going good 4 u.   Anyways, this was really good!!!

~*Nikki*~

     *~Fighting for your love~*
    *~Is something I cannot do~*
   *~I'm not good enough to win~*
*~And I'm not strong enough to lose~*

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2 posted 2001-11-17 11:20 PM


Heather,

*Hugs* I hope that he does let you ask him for help in solving the "we" problems. I haven't forgotten about your e mailing me. I've been super busy as of late and am very behind in my e mail. I promise to e mail you very soon.

This is a great poem and I thank you for sharing it with all of us. And yes, to this one too, I must say I understand. Glad to see you at Pip again.

                            Dawn

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3 posted 2001-11-19 01:52 PM


I can relate to this poem a lot...its a really difficult and frustrating situation to be in...nicely done!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

sleepymoongirl
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4 posted 2001-11-19 03:19 PM


i understand cuz i feel that way about someone i know.... from me liked the poem!

as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u.  

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