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Lisa_bebe15
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0 posted 2001-11-16 09:42 AM


I love the way you smell..Even when you aren't with me.
I love the way you touch me..Only you have that certin touch.
I love the way you cheer me up when I am down..No one else can do that.
I love the way you smile at me..The "I love you babe" smile.
I love the way you kiss my soft lips..The one and only guy to kiss me.
I love the way you laugh..even if its at me.
I love the way you hug me..Its diffrent every time.
I love every freckle on your body..even though I havent seen them all.
I love the way you look good in anything you wear..even if its your swim suit.
I love the way you drive me crazy..no one else can drive me crazy like you.

[This message has been edited by Lisa_bebe15 (edited 11-16-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-11-16 01:07 PM


Great work, I really enjoyed the read, thank you for sharing this with us and I hope to see more of your work in future  
Zu

~Love Rhon for she is Zu... err I mean Love Zu for he is Rhon... err all hail Zu~

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2 posted 2001-11-19 01:33 PM


you seem to be madly in love  
very sweet poem indeed
I can just hope someone writes something like this for me
thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?


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3 posted 2001-11-19 01:40 PM


this is such a cute poem   Awww

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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4 posted 2001-11-19 08:40 PM


I really liked this poem. Thanks for sharing.

                                 Dawn

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5 posted 2001-11-20 07:01 PM


Very sweet  

Salma

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