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SunShine913
since 2001-08-19
Posts 211Italy but from NC 
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Do you ever think of me Or smell the scent of my perfume Then feel a smile come to your lips While it lingers in the room? Do you ever miss me And wish that I was there Making wonderful love all night Out in the nighttime air? Do you ever look up at the stars Wondering if I'm looking at them, too Then make a wish upon one of them That I was there with you? Do you ever cry with sadness 'Cuz I left this earth too soon Do I bring you wonderful memories As you stare up at the moon? Do you ever feel cheated For not doing all we planned to do And did I make you happy enough During the little time I had with you? Just know I am always with you Don't ever forget that- please! And that it's my lips kissing you Every time you feel a gentle breeze. *!~!* Andrea *!~!* |
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NathanS Member
since 2001-09-27
Posts 106CA |
oooooh, nice poem, i like it  This was very good, most excellent. Me thinks that if i were the guy, i'z would be thinking those things  Great write! -Dreys "My ducks name is Vernan" |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
my girlie, this is touching....I love it! I think this is one of my favs of yours |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
"And that it's my lips kissing you Every time you feel a gentle breeze."  hehe.i liked this one very much...your writings are beautiful. =) |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
OOOOOooooH! the first stanza captured SO much! i loved the poem TRUCK LOADS A....i love the way you fill your poetry with sweet as sweet sentiments. good job girly |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
Hey, I think that this one is my favorite of yours, you've done an extraordinary job!!! Very nice work here!!!  ~*Nikki*~ *~Fighting for your love~* |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Wow, Andrea... Ur poems always amaze me. I really liked this one... Wow. Great job, one of my favorites from you. Awesome write. - Cody - |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
HEY! i love the poem, as always..check ur email! thanks alot... I LuV 2 fReAk out saLEpeEpZ. ThEy AsK me If tHey CaN heLp Me, & I sAy,'HaVe U gOT NEthINg Id like?'TheN thEy aSk mE wuT sIZe I sAy "X-tr MedIuM" |
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~gretchenp34~ Junior Member
since 2001-10-08
Posts 46Ohio, USA |
thats really beautiful....i like it alot. i can relate to it. and im really impressed with the last stanze, it was my favorite part of the poem! Love is like learning to play the piano. First you must learn to play by the rules, then you must forget the rules and play by your heart. |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
This is a great poem. I too have to say it is probably the best I've read from you. I especially loved the last stanza. Dawn |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I enjoyed this one lots! ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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sleepymoongirl Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 157bc canada |
i'm not sure if i have ever read any of your poems but this one sure caught my eyes look forward to reading more of your work from me as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u. |
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