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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
The Passion is lost the "love" is now lust the world has changed priorities rearranged courage still present when ordered by the president The war to end all wars only opened the doors the dark ages never really ended age old fueds never really mended red man vs. white man black vs. white none realizing they all share love given to all from above "If hell is so hot, why is the world so cold..." |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Very powerful poem I really like it.It has a very strong message you have a very specaial talent.Keep up the awsome work I can't wait to read more. Lauren |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
quite heartfelt...but its the "ignorance" in us all that doesnt realize that exact "love" which i somtimes fall in that category, as well anyways its REALLY nice to see your pieces again. =) |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
i loved the last two lines...VERY wise of you. i like your signiture too...sometimes life up here is hellish. good poem- keep writing  |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
-tony- aww it's kool to know that when my writing gets crappy your's just keeps getting better. keep it up, luv ya. -bergundy- maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio- |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Very powerful message you have penned here. Thanks for sharing. Dawn |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Extremely powerful poem i enjoyed it...great job!ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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sleepymoongirl Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 157bc canada |
wow awesome poem haven't seen your stuff for awhile or have i? well i liked the poem all the same from me as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
This was really good work Tony. Its been awhile since ive read your work. hope to see more.... Regina |
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