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Tamma
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In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2001-11-15 05:37 PM


ok - this one most definatly needs an explanation... Well, My lil border collie, Bisket, wasn't feeling well Friday (Nov, 9th), and when we let her out the next evening, she ran off, to be found the next morning, in our back yard, still warm, with eyes wide open.

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It seems like only yesterday
That we brought her home
A permanent fixture to our home
But she’s no longer here
Out of nowhere, she’s passed
My best friend in the world
So excited to hear the door open
Always there, waiting for us
With her tail wagging
She was always there
From my first day of school
Up until my graduation day
Always there to hug up to
For me to talk to
She understood every word
I feel so lost without her
But I know she’s still watching over.

Rest Peacefully, Bisket

If I held a star everytyme
he made me smile,I'd have the
evening sky in my palm, if
one was removed for every tear
he caused, I'd be emptyhanded.

© Copyright 2001 Tamma M. Wilson - All Rights Reserved
vixengrl04
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since 2001-04-26
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East Haddam, CT
1 posted 2001-11-15 05:50 PM


Awww I'm sooo sorry 4 ur loss!!   Losing a pet is very difficult, because it seems like they're the only ones that truly love unconditionally.  In a world full of so much hate, that kind of unconditional love is so important to have.  Just try to find comfort in knowing that you're lil doggie is happy and in a better place.  Know why? *Cuz all dogs go 2 Heaven!*   I hope time makes the hurt fade!  

~*Nikki*~

~*I'd rather you hate me for what I am than love me for what I'm not.*~
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TopGunLauren
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California
2 posted 2001-11-15 08:23 PM


Very sad poem I'm sorry that you had to lose your dog I'm sure that it one of the toughest things you have to deal with.Keep up the great work this was an exellent piece.
  Lauren

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3 posted 2001-12-21 03:51 PM


It's always hard to lose a pet
Hope you start feeling better
Nice to see you posting again Tamma
till the next post

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


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