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So much Pain
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So much Pain |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
With so much pain, her life comes to an end. Her lover cheated, she had lost her best friend. She thought they'd be together, for as long as they both would live. But his promises were broken, as was her heart, she couldn't forgive. He brought her pain, he brought her misery, the evilness inside him couldn't be changed....... ugh, my life is like a soap opera, everyday something new comes along and makes it 10x worse |
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Missthang Member
since 2001-07-03
Posts 103 |
umm, i must ask, were you done with this poem or did you plan on adding more to it? i like the message but it just doesn't seem complete for some reason and i can't quite figure out why. but it is a good poem. good write. ab "Whatever you are doing, love yourslef for doing it. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
I love the message it's a really great piece keep up the great work. LAuren |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ooohh part 2!! part 2!!! Definately see you doing more with this  |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
omg why didnt someone write something like this for my whem my lover cause me pain!?! this is exactly the kinda poem i need!! great job ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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krystlebabe19 Junior Member
since 2001-11-09
Posts 27 |
I just wanted to say I love this, its short but sweet and Ive def. been their lol well keep up the good work ! * ~Krystle~* |
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lilibeelee Member
since 2001-07-12
Posts 143 |
oh my goodness i love it. |
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