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sleepymoongirl
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since 2001-04-19
Posts 157
bc canada

0 posted 2001-11-13 03:14 PM


i feel so sad and washed out
when will these tears that come end
looking for this thing we called happyness
yet at the same time scared to find it
knowing happiness also leads to pain
not knowing how to trust people
afraid that i'll get hurt


© Copyright 2001 Scarlet Saunders - All Rights Reserved
sleepymoongirl
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since 2001-04-19
Posts 157
bc canada
1 posted 2001-11-13 03:39 PM


i know this poem is short i know its not that good but i felt like writing bear with me =D
Missthang
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since 2001-07-03
Posts 103

2 posted 2001-11-13 05:47 PM


i beg to differ! i know exactly how you feel. this has a very good message. happiness is hard to find and sometimes it seems like you always get the short end of the stick. i i can totally relate to the
"yet at the same time scared to find it
knowing happiness also leads to pain
not knowing how to trust people
afraid that i'll get hurt"
then again you can't avoid searching for happiness just becuase you are afraid of getting hurt. anyhoo, i'm not quite sure how much of this you understand but i just hope you do. good write.
ab

"Whatever you are doing, love yourslef for doing it.
Whatever you are feeling, love yourself for feeling it."
       -Thaddeus Golas

knightlyshadows
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since 2001-04-14
Posts 791
obscured vision
3 posted 2001-11-13 07:04 PM


aww *hugs* length doesnt matter hun, its the content. and ur content is packed full of emotions. i hope all is goin great for u scarlet. i know i havent talked to ya in forevers and im sorry for that. i miss you and hope everything is ok. *hugs*
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

I know Im not perfect but I can smile
& I hope that you c this heart behind my tired eyes

TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 718
California
4 posted 2001-11-13 09:11 PM


I toltally can relate to what your feeling and I hope things get better for you soon.Keep up the awsome work.
  Lauren

sleepymoongirl
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since 2001-04-19
Posts 157
bc canada
5 posted 2001-11-19 03:28 PM


hmm trying to find some of my old poems so yeah....

as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u.  

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