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Missthang
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0 posted 2001-11-12 11:31 PM


I didn't write this in response to anything or as a result of somthing. I just think about crazy stuff like this all the time. This was actually going to be a long, rhyming poem but I never made it that far. I just randomly stopped writing.


A MEMORY

If I left, would you notice?
If I died today, would you cry?
If I never came back, would you miss me?
Would I become nothing more than a memory?
How fast would you move on?
For if I died now, would you even care?

© Copyright 2001 Adamma Bankhead - All Rights Reserved
TopGunLauren
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1 posted 2001-11-13 01:52 AM


Wow I ask myself those questions to myself everyday about different people.Great poem I loved it.
  Lauren

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2 posted 2001-11-13 10:16 AM


I ask myself questions like that every single day of my life for about 3 or 4 years now...

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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3 posted 2001-12-21 03:55 PM


I guess this shows we all ask the same questions........
Thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


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4 posted 2001-12-23 01:15 AM


::bump::

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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