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krystlebabe19
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0 posted 2001-11-12 09:30 PM



I miss talking to you all,
night long on the phone

I miss hearing your voice,
when im all alone

I miss listening to you
telling me all your life stories

I miss spending time with you in the night
or even morning

I miss reading your emails
and getting your cards

I miss being with you
I never thought it would be so hard

By~*Krystle*~



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Missthang
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1 posted 2001-11-12 11:36 PM


break ups are tough and i hope you beging to get over this. give it time babe. good things come to those who wait :-)
ab

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2 posted 2001-11-13 10:22 AM


You dont know what you have until its gone...

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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3 posted 2001-11-13 09:03 PM


Honey, I feel your pain. I know exactly (well, not EXACTLY, since I'm not you, but you know what I mean) what you're going through. It hurts right now, but you WILL get through it.  

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4 posted 2001-11-14 02:21 PM


"I miss being with you
I never thought it would be so hard"

missing someone is one of the hardest fellings to deal with esp if you love them. i liked the poem.

=)

TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02
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5 posted 2001-11-14 06:11 PM


Missing or losing someone is one of the harest things to go through so I hope you can get through it soon.THis is a great piece I love it and keep up the awsome work.
  Lauren

NathanS
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6 posted 2001-11-14 07:08 PM


Hmmm, this was a great poem. I can relate to what you are talking about. This was well written, and i think you portrayed how you felt very well, straight forward.
Excellent write, To the library does it go!!

Relationships may come and go, but do not isolate yourself because of one bad, for if you do- you might just lose your chance at the special one that has been planned for you.

If you need to talk to someone, you can e-mail me: dreys@got.net
LaterZ,

             -Dreys

HeAvEnS AnGeL
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7 posted 2001-11-14 10:45 PM


I loved this I've always said, you don't know what you got till it's gone :P


Whatever tomorrow brings I'll be there, with open arms, and open eyes ~Incubus~

vixengrl04
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8 posted 2001-11-15 06:29 PM


Hey hun,
  This was really sad.   It hurts so much when you miss somebody and want them back but, at the same time, you know that it is over and they are gone forever.  Hopefully it stops hurting so much (4 both of us) and remember that you can always talk 2 me (in study hall or whenever lol) Luv ya!

~*Nikki*~

~*I'd rather you hate me for what I am than love me for what I'm not.*~
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krystlebabe19
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since 2001-11-09
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9 posted 2001-11-15 08:01 PM


I just wanted to say thank you for all the people who replied to my poem , it really helped alot knowning im not the only one who has theses feelings. Well thanxs again !

~Krystle

Spice
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10 posted 2001-12-21 10:29 PM


Blah...Break ups bite...Ecspecially when you are as close to the person as you seem to have been (Thus potrayed ot have been in your poetry at least...)
Nice write.

"I'd rather die purposely alone than to have lived an accidental life of solitude."- Jesa "§ùgã®" Thompson
  

Sherri
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11 posted 2001-12-22 05:59 PM


Wonderfully well written. I recently had a b/f more to tennessee and i live in illinois, and its been really hard with out him here so i understand what you are saying.
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12 posted 2001-12-23 08:52 AM


I'm sorry for you. I won't say you learn from it anymore because losing someone is bloody hard. I hope you'll be alright.

Take care and thanks for posting. Please remember to reply to others work also.

~AF~

If this is all the world has to offer, I want a refund on my life.

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