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Hallucination
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since 2001-03-18
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0 posted 2001-11-12 12:17 PM


I'll come runnin' when you call
I will catch you when you fall
these arms won't let your heart break.
when you hurt I will be there
And your burdens I will baer
oh no matter what it takes...

I will love you forever,
for the rest of my life...

This you have to understand
Girl your wish is my command
anything you say I'll do
I'd walk half way 'round the world
because your love is a pearl
every word I say is true...

I will love you forever,
for the rest of my life...

I'll come runnin' when you call
I will catch you when you fall
these arms won't let your heart break

I will love you forever,
for the rest of my life...

© Copyright 2001 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved
Ina
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada
1 posted 2001-11-12 01:33 PM


This sounds like a song i know...the poem was great though..keep writing.

Regina

Missthang
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since 2001-07-03
Posts 103

2 posted 2001-11-13 12:24 PM


this really does sound like a song, not one that i have heard but it sounds like it would make a good one. i like it though. and it's always nice to care for someone as much as you do. good write.
ab

"Whatever you are doing, love yourslef for doing it.
Whatever you are feeling, love yourself for feeling it."
       -Thaddeus Golas

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3 posted 2001-11-13 10:17 AM


This person is very lucky to have someone like you in their life..your a true friend...they are very hard to find

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

sleepymoongirl
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since 2001-04-19
Posts 157
bc canada
4 posted 2001-11-13 03:21 PM


wow that poem is really sweet whoever you wrote that for is lucky from me
Jimmy_Fallon
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since 2001-11-16
Posts 3
Selah , Washington
5 posted 2001-11-24 02:25 AM


Wow... you my friend are one of a kind its nearly impossible to find guys like you and this girl of yours must be extremely lucky keep up the work and good luck : )

"...but what I hate the most is that I don't hate you... not even a little bit... not even at all"

TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 718
California
6 posted 2001-11-24 10:17 PM


Great poem I loved it.
  Lauren

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