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DancinQueen
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0 posted 2001-11-12 02:21 AM



--for Jeff~~> uli!  

¤I Will Love You¤

When the stars no longer shine and your guiding light disappears,
When your world is breaking down and you can no longer stop your tears.

I'll be there to hold you
until you no longer cry
so you can rest your eyes
as I sing a lullaby

When everything around you crumbles and youre struggling to be found
When life knocks you down and you struggle to regain your ground

I'll lend my helping hand
and give you my view
taking yours glady,
guiding you through

When your heart has been broken and it is beyond repair
When your dreams are out of reach and life's just not fair

I'll make every wish
you have ever made
become reality
anytime, anyday

When you have given up on love and all its entirety
When your heart becomes hopelss and youre consumed with anxiety

I'll be there to love you
until your final breath
giving you everything
that I have left




**You can't always trust the people you want to**

[This message has been edited by DancinQueen (edited 11-12-2001).]

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allie
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1 posted 2001-11-12 02:49 AM


That was so sweet... What a wonderful poem... Thankz for writing that!! Amazing... Jeff should feel very pleased!

ALLIE

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2 posted 2001-11-12 09:46 AM


That is really sweet, he should feel speshul now  

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?


vixengrl04
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3 posted 2001-11-12 08:44 PM


Hey girl,
  This is great, I'm soo glad you posted it!!  It's like your offering everything you have 2 this person, and it's sooo sweet!! Great work!! I like it alot!!

~*Nikki*~

~*I'd rather you hate me for what I am than love me for what I'm not.*~
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4 posted 2001-11-12 10:04 PM


awwwwwwww i feel the love . i loved this poem very much not my fav. but i loved it... please keep it up i want to read more~!!

            *!~!* Andrea *!~!*    

sweetstuff101
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5 posted 2001-11-12 10:43 PM


aaaaaaaaaww! That's so sweet!!! It's just beautiful, I love it! Keep up the awesome work!


                ~*~Priscilla~*~

*Nous aimons et nous vivons*
*Nous vivons et nous aimons*

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6 posted 2001-11-13 02:15 PM


ULI   This hit my heart hard babe, this was the best thing ive read!!  I loved it dearly..thank you so much!!
It means a lot to me to know some one i dont know still cares about me..thats special!!
Love ya-
Jeff

TopGunLauren
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7 posted 2001-11-13 06:19 PM


Very touching poem it really hit me hard I loved it girl.Your poems always relate to me and that is cool.But anyway keep up the great work.
   Lauren

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8 posted 2001-11-13 09:00 PM


Yay! Kiley posted! Well done, hun, well done! That was so sweet and... sweet!

~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!?

~Love me because I am Rhonda

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9 posted 2001-11-14 02:03 PM


what a sweet poem...everyone need a person like this...*cough*wheresminewheresmine*cough*. lol

mr. romantist seems like he liked it VERY much...great job, Kiley. enjoyed it fully...its nice of you to write a piece for someone.

=)

Jeremiah Johnson
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10 posted 2001-11-15 01:12 PM


i do love this one alot my friend and i hope he liked it when he read it. i can see the little tear running down his face right now in my mindseye. keep up the good work.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


keoni
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11 posted 2001-11-15 01:30 PM


Very nice poem. The format was cool. I really loved the ending. It brought everything together so nicely. Good job
Jon

"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur
"Sometimes it takes a painful loss to realize you are free"- Bouncing Souls

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