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K. Rebel Junior Member
since 2001-10-21
Posts 40San Juan, PR |
Crawling into darkness, Only to find my heart, Crying threw and threw, And weeping only for you, I found myself lost, Never to be found, East of love and west of you. This is rather a crazy poem i just wrote out of nowhere comparing cocaine to love.... there equally addictive to my belief. |
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Knight of Secrecy Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 113San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Ohh, my god the cocaine addict came out of the closet.LOL. good poem here -C.M. |
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allie Member
since 2001-07-09
Posts 218Australia |
That was really great... loved the last line summed it all up so well... Great poem |
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PoetryIsLife 
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
That has to be one of the best poems I've read on pip. Beautiful imagarey, vived pictures and word choice. Honestly, I'm at a loss for words! Loved the last line as well. Loved it all! Absolutely a great poem. Sincerely, Titus "....this time I was mistaken for handing you a heart worth breaking." Nickelback |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Short and sweet...great job!!! I enjoyed it a lot and i liked how you managed to pack a lotta meaning into a few lines..it makes it more effective that way  good job and keep em comin!ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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