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Master
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0 posted 2001-11-11 09:26 PM



Listen, Muse,--
Enough words! Enough!
Twisting my tongue like that! What’s the use?!
Don’t you see -- my whole body is charged with love,
Give me a match to light up the fuse.
Loosen the reins.
Let time- the black stallion
Gallop unbound, ardent, zealous, hot-tempered.
Around its neck, tie the moon’s medallion
To illumine the nights of the somber December.
Place your head on my shoulder
As the razor of sunrise
Sweeps the foam of the clouds from the cheek of the sky.

And the morning, inspecting the courtyards of Brandeis,
Finds everyone sleeping,
Except you
And I.

Like madmen, we’ll dance on the brink of insanity,
Testing the puddles for the depth of the skies.
On the vines of the roads, we shall find immortality
And with laughter, we’ll write where the ink never dries.

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1 posted 2001-11-11 11:37 PM


HAHA this was cool. Darn muse...never does what it's told anyway.  

Jenn

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2 posted 2001-11-12 01:32 PM


whats up bro...excellent as always...

You know im a sucker for meter so these are my favorite lines

Like madmen, we’ll dance on the brink of insanity,
Testing the puddles for the depth of the skies.
On the vines of the roads, we shall find immortality
And with laughter, we’ll write where the ink never dries.

but the whole poem is great   take it easy bro

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3 posted 2001-11-13 01:32 PM


Heyyy...i havent seen you around in a while! How ya doin?? Nice to see you posting again...great poem as usual  

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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