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Danielle
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0 posted 2001-11-11 08:17 PM


In my years on this Earth I've learned so many things
Don't always believe what you hear
People don't always speak the truth
Things aren't always what they seem
Sometimes your eyes do play tricks on you
Be careful who you tell your secrets to
You never know who has a big mouth
Don't put all your trust in a person
You might get your heart broken
Falling love with someone can come so easy
But don't fall too hard because it's a long way down
Don't get caught up in the feelings you have
That's how you can get trapped
Caught up in a love affair that's just a bunch of crap
It's no fun and it's not right
So be careful in your actions

Blessed Be Those Who
Reads My Writing

© Copyright 2001 Danielle Lefebvre - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-12 10:09 AM


very true. great poem...keep posting  

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**You can't always trust the people you want to**

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2 posted 2001-11-12 11:04 AM


So much truth in this one. I love it, and agree with it. Grrr to life sometimes.

Jenn

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

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3 posted 2001-11-13 01:33 PM


Ah...so true...so true...

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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